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Old 26th June 2006, 15:54
pearly pearly is offline
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Default Rare Poem!!

Hi, I don't normally write any poetry, unless I'm really passionate about something. I've had the day off today and I've been so inspired by this website that I thought I'd incorporate all my feelings and the experiences of others in a poem. It's called Beautiful Rose and it's based on the effects of bullies in this world. here goes!.... (please be gentle with me!!)

So here I am a prisoner trying to get out, a silent voice trying to shout
You took my riches
You took my glow
I'm a lost soul with nowhere to go

You pushed me into the dark lakes of despair,
Why did you do this? Why don't you care?

I'm like a trampled rose now,
My heart bleeds love in your air of hate,
Please don't do this again, this that noone should replicate

You hurt me so deep man,
You hurt me as I never would,
I don't even want revenge even if I could

But you're not here now, you're not in my life anymore
I've put my life jacket on and I'm swimming to the shore
That rose will again rise
My riches will return
And one day my memories of you I will burn
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Old 26th June 2006, 16:39
Winnie57 Winnie57 is offline
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That's a lovely and sad poem. Obviously written from the heart.
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Old 26th June 2006, 19:21
CatchMeIfYouCan CatchMeIfYouCan is offline
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Good poem.
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